garland of freshly cut tears…

placed upon the street
love’s silent testimony
dried salty white wreath
left by a grieving mother
oblation to freedom’s god

 

2 thoughts on “garland of freshly cut tears…

  1. Just a few well-placed words and you have your reader with not only an absolutely clear picture, but you also make us stop what we’re doing and think. A rare gift.

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