without doubt…

without-doubt

as if
rejecting
a lover’s plea
she
shades
herself
from
the noonday sun
knowing that
the sun sill
always
return
as
will
her lovers

7 thoughts on “without doubt…

      • That wasn’t my point. She looks unhappy and I thought your poem was about how she shades herself from the sun as a metaphor for how she shades herself from her clients (

  1. Oh, dear, the comment got posted but I didn’t finish my thoughts. WP is not working correctly today.
    She shades herself from her clients in order to act as though she enjoys their paid for service, acts as though they are lovers… but they are not, reminds me of the Tina Turner song: Private Dancer:

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