what you dreamed…

what you dreamed

you seen
the last star
it fades
from view
unkept by prayers
count its
last lights
gone now
like your words
words heard
never done
the last heartbeats
the star

8 thoughts on “what you dreamed…

  1. I love this, and may I say regarding technique, I love how your line breaks inform your verbal reading of the poem. It is more rare than it should be for me to hear the poet read the poem the way I heard it in my head. You are brilliant at doing that. Thank you for each one of these.

  2. Sad and beautiful together. Forgiveness is all that can take away the disappointment, the anger and the hurt in those souls.

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