what does the bird do you ask when it first leaves its safe nest does it soar upon the breeze or shake in fear of the world perhaps it finds that true love has no physical limits
Six line English Sijo…thanks to dVerse for the introduction to the form.
Awesome, from the time I was old enough to walk I would clime as high as I could. When I was old enough to vocalize my reason I would say I was looking for the wind, the right wind, so that I could fly. I hope you have a nice weekend.
So lovely!
That is very effective – I love this poem 🙂
Beautiful
Beautiful, I do believe that true love lasts forever and can conquer any fears, and any circumstances.
Yay! Well done. I like the connection of emotion to the act of flying. That hope of limitlessness at the end, just right. So glad you tried it. 🙂
Awesome, from the time I was old enough to walk I would clime as high as I could. When I was old enough to vocalize my reason I would say I was looking for the wind, the right wind, so that I could fly. I hope you have a nice weekend.
This is why when someone dies, they are still with us and we are with them, because: “true love has no physical limits”
What a wonderful question, Charles. Is it only survival at stake or does Love have something to do with it?
Very nice. I’ll have to explore six line English Sijo now.
Love the emotion in this.
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that last line is magnificent Charles…
I wonder the same too.
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