war dead…

the sea is salty
because angels collect tears
from survivors’ eyes

12 thoughts on “war dead…”

Sharmishtha | July 25, 2012 at 2:37 AM

wonderful!

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stuff I said | July 25, 2012 at 4:48 AM

a truly heart touching poem, war is awful.

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Gabrielle Bryden | July 25, 2012 at 5:12 PM

Great poem Charles – short and sour!

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Kathryn McCullough | July 25, 2012 at 6:53 PM

Stunning, Charlie!

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Susan Scutti | July 25, 2012 at 7:30 PM

Excellent
imho

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Jamie Dedes | July 25, 2012 at 8:17 PM

At once sad and fanciful.

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mairmusic | July 26, 2012 at 7:27 PM

Lovely idea.

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Shakti Ghosal | July 27, 2012 at 12:43 AM

“… angels collect tears…” Loved the thought.

Shakti

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gnunn | July 27, 2012 at 12:57 AM

words like these fill the lungs charles,

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Genie | July 27, 2012 at 10:15 AM

Brilliant, Charles. My favorite poem of yours.

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souldipper | July 30, 2012 at 7:05 PM

Makes its point solidly, Charles.

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Selma | August 5, 2012 at 10:59 PM

I love this so much. It really speaks to me. WOW. I don’t really know what to say….

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