June 7, 2012 by slpmartin timing… i wait just wanted wait to say wait that i’m wait dying and can’t wait https://slpmartin.files.wordpress.com/2012/06/timing.mp3 Share this:ShareTwitterLinkedInLike this:Like Loading... Related
the sheer simplicity is sweet – thanks
Whoah, this really crept up on me… has a rhythmic kick.
aloha slpmartin yes now. and the wait too. aloha
Nice play on the word wait.
This also evokes the word “wake” for me.
sad commentary on our “health” system, my friend.
very nice effect from this, Charles – love the image too
Powerful double-stranded poem
love the double meanings and that bit of word play at the end that tie them together 🙂
You are a wordmaster. For sure.
ditto to selma. you are an amazing poet and a fantastic wordmaster. hmm that title suits you perfectly.
Clever approach to embedding the condition of too many medical facilities.
I didn’t think of the health system until mairmusic’s comment — and your poem really struck me then. Lots of waiting — and dealing with insurance, too.
right to the point … and the artwork gets better all the time.