so damn tired…

copyright cwmartin 2012

this road
is longer
than i thought
much harder
to climb
than promised
too many hours
spent praying
with nothing
to show
some bruised knees
empty dreams
of what life
would be
nothing more
than words
on winter’s frosted glass

18 thoughts on “so damn tired…

  1. nice capture of life’s essential meaninglessness – it’s up to the individual to give it meaning, isn’t it? for me, reading, your poem contains a world of meaning.

    on winter’s frosted glass

    it’s as if what preceded was painted in flat black on white, and suddenly, a world of dimension and colour opens up. brilliant!

  2. A certain hopelessness comes thru to me. That’s sad. It always amazes me that people seem to want instant answers to their prayers, He is faithful to those who love him, but what we ask comes in His timing not ours. One doesn’t know for sure that there is nothing to show for all those prayers, one needs to keep faith and hope in their life, we do not know what He has planned for us.

  3. iCat Says: It’s also know as the “terrible dailiness”.

    However, the poet Leonard Cohen, said it very well: “There’s a crack in everything, that’s how the light gets in.”

    You expressed the “terrible dailiness” very well. Good job. 🙂

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