dream state…

coypright cwmartin 2011

these dreams
before sunrise
that have
no beginning
or end
are but shadows
of what you desire
they are what
we see
when time
stands still
they are fingers
along the spine
when you are
half awake
they are
a lover’s breath
just
before

13 thoughts on “dream state…

  1. For some reason the poem seems unfinished, like that last line was hinting at something more, but that in and of itself is a good literary device. It leaves space for the reader to create their own scenario. Glad to be able to comment here again.

  2. superb imagination and creativity here in this poem. Indeed, I sense color, voice and tone. Well my friend, you are developing into a crafty poet. Keep spreading your wings and so you can fly! Well done, truth teller!

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