May 29, 2011 by slpmartin sentenced… with bag in hand she walked out the door leaving him imprisoned in his yesterdays https://slpmartin.files.wordpress.com/2011/05/sentenced.mp3 Share this:ShareTwitterLinkedInLike this:Like Loading... Related
Some people are forever left in yesterdays ..
poignant, succinct– nicely written, Charles!
imprisoned in his yesterdays…dang!
sad when someone stays and the other moves on…and usually this happens long before someone walks out the door finally.. good poignant write (and read) charles
perfect snapshot poem, Charles – a novel (or biography) in few words…
Oh, this is so sad, Charles–but beautifully so!
So few words, but such a huge impact. Nicely done!
The pic is perfect – I could look at it all day
The sentiment I want to run away
We all have our ‘imprisonments” . . . but hope lives on!
This was so haunting. It’s so true we can become imprisoned by the past.
Oh, now I like this. A lot.
Wonderful! So many people are imprisoned in the past – what a waste.
he’ll be busy doing time, while she tries to shake off the time she had with him
Perhaps his yesterdays hold the key to what he did to make her move out? Great write Charles!
In a sense they are both burdened, right? She carries baggage and he imprisoned–I like the way this works.
“Imprisoned in his yesterdays” – great!
beautiful charles. very beautifully captured moment.