there was no need
to study the life line
coursing down the palm
of her hand
to know
of her past
one need only
to count the scars
on her face
stitches added
over the years
but this christmas
was different
she was alone
in the house her father built
atop a mountain
miles from the city
she thought she loved
in a one room cabin
with a small tree
adorned with left over
ornaments
but each one
was placed with love
upon those branches
and she
finally
felt loved
not by a man
but by
a simple
birth
Perfect beauty!!
Best to you C
Hugs from the Moon
Too good!!!!:)
Charles, I wondered…and here it is. You do not disappoint!
I meant that I just knew it would be deep and with feeling.
very nicely done
What a lovely poem, Charles! Perfect for the holiday! Merry Christmas!
Merry Christmas!
Hope you’re feeling loved during these “holy days”, Charles. Peace
Just clear as a bell, Charlie.
Peace.
A special day captured in a lifetime of sadness. Lovely.
Hi Charles .. Beautiful story .. I loved it – thank you.. you certainly don’t disappoint with your posts .. Hilary
Ah, Charles– poignant as you make joy arise from the ashes of more sadness than most of us have ever known. Hope your Christmas was fine!
Wonderful Charles-
Such a balance of tensions in your poem between what may include scars of memory and a resonating hope for the future… makes me think she discovered an inner peace. Great reading too, Charles.
Beautiful.
Merry Christmas Charles 🙂
Just lovely… happy allyourdays !
love this so much
this is magical charles, purely magical. May that love stay in her heart forever.
This is dear. A treasure. Thank you.
beautiful ending/beggining
Love the image you have posted with this one Charles.
My heart felt great sorrow for this woman, until she was able to get away from the brutality that she had experienced in life and was able to look forwards towards a brighter future – based on the wonderful message of Christmas. Thanks for sharing xx