I love it. Are there any techniques that you have left to try? Given your boundless creativity, I’m sure that they will keep appearing. Keep up the great work, but enjoy your trip.
exploring and he jumped from the edge
of the page to that area where you
leave yourself
barer and purer…
he checks his ankles to look for dirt, when
we really know he’s wondering if we’ll still like him when
we hear his voice, or was that someone else?
Loved how you shifted my thinking of you, Charles!
Loved your poem War and how you present it… you, rouge, bohemian, you!!!
Read Between the Minds 
Very nicely done, Charles.
Wow! I love it.
I love it. Are there any techniques that you have left to try? Given your boundless creativity, I’m sure that they will keep appearing. Keep up the great work, but enjoy your trip.
war is the greatest curse on human civilisation, i wish and pray we can build a warless society.
skipping the video, war is one thing that always depresses me.
exploring and he jumped from the edge
of the page to that area where you
leave yourself
barer and purer…
he checks his ankles to look for dirt, when
we really know he’s wondering if we’ll still like him when
we hear his voice, or was that someone else?
Loved how you shifted my thinking of you, Charles!
Loved your poem War and how you present it… you, rouge, bohemian, you!!!
very cool post! sad verse but intriguing in it’s aV form– have you posted it publicly?
Yes, this is one of the few I put up on youtube…thanks for your comments.
Powerful message and artful presentation. The spreading circle to me seems to form a bullseye from the concepts. Fine work, Charles.
Wow, I know I must have said this before, but that is truly awesome, as reading and as presentation.
“encircled by a dying planet
that doesn’t give
a damn”
actually gave me shivers…
hope you well…
This is super creative.
Excellent- really great presentation for this one.. and with your voice..always adds that wonderful depth.
Charles, is that not a poppy? You are sooooo clever!
really powerful video. Very clever way of drawing out a picture with you words.
Well done, Charles, poem and vid. Nice!
Wow – very impressive, the words and the video!