unsolicited denial…

A Classic Art Challenge:  Just as I had recovered from my last challenge with Jade, a new writing adventure has been embarked upon..Jade has sent me five paintings which are to serve as the prompts for this challenge.  Since I substituted an extra Philosophy course for Art Appreciation, this may prove to be far more difficult for me than the previous challenges.  However, I have accepted her challenge and managed to find five paintings to send her in return.  We hope you enjoy our poetry.


The Disquieting Muses (1918) by Giorgio De Chirico

my muse
grasps my hand
pulling me
away from the plaza
these muses
are not of the nine
we must leave
before we lose our song
for they are the spirits
of the lost souls
who stared into the abyss
they were born
long before time began
before men counted
their fleeting moments
on this earth
given form again by the drums of war
and the insatiable greed of men
they have returned
to claim their place
among us
as we turned
to leave
one of the muses spoke
here is your
holy roman empire
an empty plaza
filled with muses
that inspire
the nothingness of the abyss
here your glowing expectations
are mere embers
lying outside
the gates of hades
your change-the-world attitude
has become quiet acceptance
before I could hear more
my muse had pulled
me safely
into my dreams


13 thoughts on “unsolicited denial…

  1. This almost sounds like Beatrice leading Dante through his personal hell… May another great challenge commence! Bravo Charlie!

  2. Interesting… your Muse didn’t want you to face the canvas that you may have created the Most Wonderful, Powerful Lansacape of Enlightenment on… hmmm, maybe he/she knew you were destined to follow another path!

    Nice slice of “suppose”!

  3. Those muses (in the pic) do not look like anyone I want hanging round my place – no no no! …we must leave
    before we lose our song
    , thank goodness for dreams to be pulled into, for safely

  4. Wow Charlie, this one somehow has special meaning to me! Love the fact that you’re using art as a prompt!! Can’t wait to see what you both come up with next!! Have a great weekend my friend xox

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