man
does not die
but rather
he
like a half-forgotten dream
lingers
throughout the day
called life
within
the minds
of those who
remain
and they
like children
keep seeking
the now forgotten part
as if
then
the dream
can
become
Read Between the Minds
Poetry, Photography and Random Thoughts of Life
Read Between the Minds 
We have only one life and we all die; either we go to heaven or hell. It all depends whether we live or die, determining by either our sins are washed away by Jesus’ blood, which is, to accept Him as our personal Lord and Savior and live, or to be lost in eternity in hell fire. We get to choose to where we want to go, either heaven or hell.
Nice work. Like the theme and suggestive lines. “…if/then/the dream” Interesting word play on logic/rhetorical device. Thanks.
loved it, especially how it ended so abruptly, making us almost want to complete the poem ourselves. beautiful.
loved it. amzing work
I like this very much…whatever your spiritual beliefs, it is inrrefutable that people live on in other memories. Interesting image to accompany it too.
Love this, great poem about a hard subject.
Beautiful words on a hard subject. People live on in our hearts