the start of a new day
without the sun’s warm rays
it’s the cold wet ground
heavy with the tears of morning
and it’s the ear-ringing silence
which causes the heart to beat with fear
the fear that a love
has gone to stay
Read Between the Minds
Poetry, Photography and Random Thoughts of Life
Read Between the Minds 
I really enjoyed this piece. Not an easy concept to define, yet you manage to through imagery and feeling. Nice work. Thanks.
Adam
waw…”has gone to stay”… I love it!
Good job!
Such truth, such pain
and it’s the ear-ringing silence
which causes the heart to beat with fear…loved these lines. Good poem. Pearl
The art is just amazing. I love it – love how the wall mirrors words. And the poem, in your last line you capture that sickening feeling of loss, of loneliness. Great stuff. Good use of art to magnify your poetry.
I love “ear-ringing silence.” That says so much.
lovely, as always. loved the last line, especially
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the art & the poem fit together well. i could feel the emotion flow as i continued to read the poem. well done!
~IS
I can almost feel that dreaded and exaggerated beat the heart experiences with the rush of fear. Fear due to loss, especially loss of love, is always accompanied by loneliness and is the sharpest of all fears.
Another beautiful piece!
-fH
You capture the feeling superbly — enjoyed reading this very much.