it is unknown
how these things occur
the spontaneous combustion
of a soul
its ashes
mingling
with a passing star
creating
the comet’s tail
glowing with the soul’s light
giving witness
to
the divine
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Gorgeous, mystical poem; love the photo too, it’s very powerful.
Wow, this one is very special! :)
I like this idea very much, a soul becoming a comet’s tail. It’s wonderful to think about.
Wonderful poem Charles, love this!
Wow, what a beautiful thought, Charles!
brilliant, Charles! of all the poems i’ve read by you, this is now my favourite
Highly mystical.
Giving and bearing witness. Well done my friend. ~ Regards, Dan
Wow. Beautifully written.
Beautiful and inspiring
What an interesting idea, I think I would love to be a comets tail
mysteries beyond human grasp!