February 21, 2013 by slpmartin give and take… it is unknown how these things occur the spontaneous combustion of a soul its ashes mingling with a passing star creating the comet’s tail glowing with the soul’s light giving witness to the divine Download: given-and-take.mp3 About these ads Share this:ShareStumbleUponGoogle +1Like this:Like Loading...
Gorgeous, mystical poem; love the photo too, it’s very powerful.
Wow, this one is very special! :)
I like this idea very much, a soul becoming a comet’s tail. It’s wonderful to think about.
Wonderful poem Charles, love this!
Wow, what a beautiful thought, Charles!
brilliant, Charles! of all the poems i’ve read by you, this is now my favourite
Highly mystical.
Giving and bearing witness. Well done my friend. ~ Regards, Dan
Wow. Beautifully written.
Beautiful and inspiring
What an interesting idea, I think I would love to be a comets tail
mysteries beyond human grasp!