on soiled knees…

on soiled knees

simple transaction
offer life everlasting
forfeit all questions


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18 thoughts on “on soiled knees…

  1. Considering the exhausting amount of stress and strain poured into futile questions, that would be nice…but it’s a tinny, hollow faith that is too afraid to ask questions. The real leap of faith is believing the answers. Once again–fabulous piece!

  2. Anyone who has read this as referring to the believer’s forfeiting questions, please look again at the syntax of the poem, and then reconsider its meaning… It is koan-like in its simplicity.

  3. This is brilliant Charles – particularly relevant today with all the issues of child abuse, etc., – these institutions need a massive shake up and reality check in the modern world – they should be a force for good but are heading in the wrong direction by a mile.

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